AMAZING BEGINNING TO WHAT i ASSUME WILL BE A GREAT PROJECT. lOVING THE STORY SO FAR, THE COMEDY ISN'T OVERWHELMING LIKE IN SOME OTHER VNS, OVERALL LOOKING FORWARD TO FUTURE UPDATES!!
There is a lot to like in what has been released so far, a really solid foundation of what could be a potential powerhouse in the AVN world. It just needs a bit of polish in a few places. There are times where scenes or dialogue feel rushed because they start or end abruptly and aren't allowed to breathe or establish themselves. It makes some parts hard to follow because it reads like list of bullet points instead of a cohesive narrative. Improving the prose even just a little bit could really elevate the story to read more naturally instead of like a run on sentence. Otherwise I like everything I see here, the girls look great, setting and renders are well done and there looks to be a solid depth to the story, just don't rush to tell it.
I just finished playing the 1st ep, and I have to say by far the most impressive game i've played. Never have I ever rewatched a scene so many times as when I saw Harper, the dynamic camera shot and music definitely take it to another level. I just hope she's romanceable, I'll literally die if she isn't :') Keep up the amazing work. It’s clear this project has a lot of heart behind it, and as a player, I really appreciate that. Can’t wait to experience more!
I thought this game looked great, but after playing the first chapter I've realized it's cheesy and the writing is lazy.
Like "oh no, a vampire just kicked me in the chest. Why can't I move?" Oh, it's because the vampire somehow intentionally snapped the MC's neck so he would be paralyzed. But don't worry, I'm sure that will be fine. Can't wait to see how that life changing injury is healed in the next chapter.
On top of that the MC's outfit just looks like a Criss Angel cosplay. and his body looks like it was modeled after a slice of pizza. Why are his shoulders so wide but his hips and legs are so narrow? His body is just two straight lines converging down to one point. Not to mention the stupid-ass cross earring he wears. More edge lord inspiration, I take it?
Anyway, the whole game reads like it was written by a 14 year-old. Sucks, because the graphics are pretty nice and the girls are really well done. I just can't look past the stupid writing and the utterly dumb looking MC. Sorry.
Also, the font for these comments is fucking stupid too. Who the fuck wants letters that link or overlap?
This person is being overly critical. This game only has a great beginning. Its something different that what others put out and the graphics are better than a lot of other games out right now.
So creator, don't get discouraged by someone who is trying to sap the joy out of a personal project because at the end of the day what matters is that you enjoy the story you are building.
This is not constructive criticism but just destructive complaints. HE lost all credibility when he started complaining about the font for the comments.
Very stunning visually and the story has a really fast, but still controlled, pace. It's prbly great if you have ADHD but I personally would've liked a bit more time to get settled in. And the MC has personality, he's not the traditional self-insertable husk. The UI looks nice but the text in the codex is quite small; I don't know how someone on a smartphone is supposed to read it.
Definitely check it out; it's a 45 minute adventure and while not everyone may agree with the style, you have to admit that this is really well made.
Hey Dev, your game looks super cool. I absolutely love it..... But there's something I want to ask you. And that is...
Firstly, don't you think it would be better if the text box is little bit wider... Because whenever there's a bigger dialogue, the text box won't be able to hold everything.
Secondly, whenever there's this "thinking" dialogue appear don't make it transparent... Use quotation and Italic. Because when you make it transparent it's kinda hard to read than normal dialogues.
And finally,
Can you make something so that we can completely remove this text-box. I know it's already transparent. But it'll be really great if we can remove it when we feel like it.
Yeah Dev, you have nothing to worry other than that. I don't know if you get an inspiration from eternum of not for the characters, but the character design and animation is off the chart. And the story looks fabulous too. Keep it up and please never abandon this avn because I'm telling you, it's gonna become a masterpiece just like Eternum.
I am not being a smart ass... but genuinely asking.... does that mean... private.. humiliation play is on the table? As in might there be some BD and SM and relevant subkinks potentially?
Sweet. Sometimes a Blacklist such as this, for a game which is MEANT to be a AVN, key part being A, bodes poorly for the likelihood of decent (or perhaps in this case, indecent lol) adult content. It winds up being very short, vary rare, very limited, and very vanilla.... but this Blacklist only listed very extreme things (save the incest thing, which is weird, but not as extreme as the rest)..... so with that in mind, and knowing that other more kinky things likely WILL be in the game... my faith is restored ;) :P
Honestly I think I'm okay with everything here, I mean I agree with your blacklist, I don't hate everything on the same level but also don't care fo it.
I only know two or three here put in a fantasy settig, that worked because of good writing.
Anyway, I'm combing trough my PC removing what takes long to update to make a bit room on the PC.
I liked this however, how close are we to a new update? Somehow I just see an update promt, let's see....oh just chinese
That's probably the shortest, most basic and reasonable blacklist I've seen in a while. Anyone worried about this being too vanilla must be unaware of the many possibilities that lie between vanilla and the items on this list.
As an aside, the list seems agnostic to the existence of many other fetishes that are even worse. Maybe it's a good thing you didn't know or think of those. Not going to go into detail, but there's some sick stuff on the internet that you absolutely don't want to stumble onto, ever.
“Nobody ever gonna Like your Game” they said.
But none of them knew how wrong and still were fully right with that.
Thee is nothing to complain. Humor, style, renders, girls.
And don’t worry about those peasants below. Complaining about “lesbians” but would you have implemented 2 giga Chads for some fresh air, they would like it much more less. Secretly they goon to all those girls anyway. ^^
A good start, will be watching. Visually, it is stunning, beautiful, and I am not worried about the passe Supernatural storyline... I am a man of culture who plays AVNs for the A part above all else.... it can be a manic, bipolar, cliche MESS of a storyline, as long as the Adult scenes are long, interactive, blocked, paced, and shot right, with high quality graphics.
We definitely have the latter here... now I am just crossing my fingers we get Adult scenes which honor the promise of the aesthetic, and the quality graphics.
Jesus christ I get this is a porn game, but the amount of incels who threaten to not play the game or give money when they havent even done so anyway is just fucking stupid. not every LI is a straight woman craving only the MC's dick for all her life.
author should not change the vision he has of all the characters just for the sake of a few incels who demand the game be to their standrd or else they will withdraw their meager 5$, acting like that is enough to change the course of the game for their enjoyment.
Yeah lesbians are definitely hot if you're still either a teen or a virgin, if you're a grown up and still find lesbians hot you clearly need a bit more excitement in your life.
shits someone elses life, if you find lesbians hot you lowk a creep. they dont want you gang, leave them alone. there sexuality aint meant to be your kink ong.
Wrong. Vast majority of the AVN's slap in the "obligatory" lesbian or bisexual and it's old and used up. Also "lesbians" are hot is subjective. I don't find them hot and I'm not the only person who feels like that. There's a reason they segment this stuff out on porn sites. Some people are into them, some are not. Maybe AVN creators could learn a lesson from how this is segregated elsewhere.
Slap whatever name you want on people who disagree with you, doesn't matter. developers want to make money and here I am telling them how to earn money from me. if they want to pay attention, great. if they don't, fine, my money goes elsewhere.
No one cares about your money kid. So bye! game doesn't have to cater to you likes or everyone elses. If you know so much then make your own damm game. If not stfu and just leave.
imagine GETTING THIS TRIGGERED BY SOMEONE ELSES OPINION, DON'T WORRY DUDE WHEN YOU GET OLDER A GRANNY MIGHT FEEL SORRY FOR YOU SO YOU CAN FINALLY GET YOUR DICK WET, UNTIL THEN STICK WITH YOUR LESBIAN PORN LIKE A LOSER.
found the other incel kid, and for the record, I have a woman, something you will never have, and guess what, she loves women too, so I get to enjoy more women than your pathetic cuck life will ever have. Imagine being afraid of lesbian porn, lmao, what an incel.
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WHY IS THIS CAPS ONLY?!
It looks like that because of font
AMAZING BEGINNING TO WHAT i ASSUME WILL BE A GREAT PROJECT. lOVING THE STORY SO FAR, THE COMEDY ISN'T OVERWHELMING LIKE IN SOME OTHER VNS, OVERALL LOOKING FORWARD TO FUTURE UPDATES!!
beautiful, the girls' aesthetics are the best, really unsurpassed
lesbo avoidable?
Of course, Its
这个游戏比我玩过的其他的视觉新说更开放更大胆 有的还没有介绍这个人就已经认识了 故事进行的好快 这种过度刺激的东西里面还是要掺和一些平平淡淡的才是真的 我们有一句俗话就是平平淡淡才是真
有一些角色看着很不错我想和他们好好相处的时候就已经到上到了床上 罗茜不喜欢主角对其他女生也开怀送抱吗 怕别人抢走他 我是这么了解的这个人 其他人的关系也了解的不是很清楚我以为伊莎贝拉 和主角是夫妻关系呢总是亲爱的亲爱的叫 只看联系人我也分辨不出来主角和她们是什么关系
建模也挺好的 除了故事上面有些不明所以的东西好像中文翻译是不是也有一些小小的问题 大部分还是能懂的
罗莎莉娅就是罗茜吧 看好多人都这么叫 游戏里面也没点到
有一个角色好像是双性恋但是他被露西拒绝了 不过露西也真可爱
画廊里面最后一个角色其他之前 那角色好像见过但是没提到他是谁 目前也没玩完等看后面能不能告诉她是谁
aMAZING GAME FOR MY B4LLS
aLRIGHT DIDDY
游戏真的太棒了
There is a lot to like in what has been released so far, a really solid foundation of what could be a potential powerhouse in the AVN world. It just needs a bit of polish in a few places. There are times where scenes or dialogue feel rushed because they start or end abruptly and aren't allowed to breathe or establish themselves. It makes some parts hard to follow because it reads like list of bullet points instead of a cohesive narrative. Improving the prose even just a little bit could really elevate the story to read more naturally instead of like a run on sentence. Otherwise I like everything I see here, the girls look great, setting and renders are well done and there looks to be a solid depth to the story, just don't rush to tell it.
Ok i just finished episode 2 and it just get better. the girls are hot, the plot is amazing, just keep up with great work, hard to wait for chapter 3.
I just finished playing the 1st ep, and I have to say by far the most impressive game i've played.
Never have I ever rewatched a scene so many times as when I saw Harper, the dynamic camera shot and music definitely take it to another level. I just hope she's romanceable, I'll literally die if she isn't :')
Keep up the amazing work. It’s clear this project has a lot of heart behind it, and as a player, I really appreciate that. Can’t wait to experience more!
Got to play the early build, and I'll say the renders and animations are top notch, and for the future, I'll expect a lot from you. All the best
This was really good, now I'm wondering when we'd get the next update...
I thought this game looked great, but after playing the first chapter I've realized it's cheesy and the writing is lazy.
Like "oh no, a vampire just kicked me in the chest. Why can't I move?" Oh, it's because the vampire somehow intentionally snapped the MC's neck so he would be paralyzed. But don't worry, I'm sure that will be fine. Can't wait to see how that life changing injury is healed in the next chapter.
On top of that the MC's outfit just looks like a Criss Angel cosplay. and his body looks like it was modeled after a slice of pizza. Why are his shoulders so wide but his hips and legs are so narrow? His body is just two straight lines converging down to one point. Not to mention the stupid-ass cross earring he wears. More edge lord inspiration, I take it?
Anyway, the whole game reads like it was written by a 14 year-old. Sucks, because the graphics are pretty nice and the girls are really well done. I just can't look past the stupid writing and the utterly dumb looking MC. Sorry.
Also, the font for these comments is fucking stupid too. Who the fuck wants letters that link or overlap?
This person is being overly critical. This game only has a great beginning. Its something different that what others put out and the graphics are better than a lot of other games out right now.
So creator, don't get discouraged by someone who is trying to sap the joy out of a personal project because at the end of the day what matters is that you enjoy the story you are building.
This is not constructive criticism but just destructive complaints. HE lost all credibility when he started complaining about the font for the comments.
Well good thing I didn't lose credibility until the very end of my comment.
Alright, when im home i install the game simply cuz of the silver haired girl. I will write a review when i played it 🙏
Game is good. All i really want from it is for each version to be 3 times as long as the first one. take all the time you need dev.
iT WAS ONLY EPISODE 1 BY I GOT INTO THE GAME SO HARD, IT ENDED TO FAST, VERY GOOD GAME, CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT UPDATE.
Thank you for giving the mc an actual personality unlike most games in this market
tHE WORST PART ABOUT THIS INTRO WAS THE MC CUTTING HIS HAIR. gIVE ME AN OPTION TO KEEP HIS HAIR /HJ
Very stunning visually and the story has a really fast, but still controlled, pace. It's prbly great if you have ADHD but I personally would've liked a bit more time to get settled in. And the MC has personality, he's not the traditional self-insertable husk. The UI looks nice but the text in the codex is quite small; I don't know how someone on a smartphone is supposed to read it.
Definitely check it out; it's a 45 minute adventure and while not everyone may agree with the style, you have to admit that this is really well made.
Hey Dev, your game looks super cool. I absolutely love it..... But there's something I want to ask you. And that is...
Firstly, don't you think it would be better if the text box is little bit wider... Because whenever there's a bigger dialogue, the text box won't be able to hold everything.
Secondly, whenever there's this "thinking" dialogue appear don't make it transparent... Use quotation and Italic. Because when you make it transparent it's kinda hard to read than normal dialogues.
And finally,
Can you make something so that we can completely remove this text-box. I know it's already transparent. But it'll be really great if we can remove it when we feel like it.
Okay, thanks for feedback I will work on textbox
Yeah Dev, you have nothing to worry other than that. I don't know if you get an inspiration from eternum of not for the characters, but the character design and animation is off the chart. And the story looks fabulous too. Keep it up and please never abandon this avn because I'm telling you, it's gonna become a masterpiece just like Eternum.
ZEV BABY LOVES YOU DUVE <3 *don't check my profile*
WHAT KINKS IF ANY APERE IN THIS GAME
I don't have a kink list on my mind right now, but I do have a blacklist.
I am not being a smart ass... but genuinely asking.... does that mean... private.. humiliation play is on the table? As in might there be some BD and SM and relevant subkinks potentially?
They will most likely be in the game.
Sweet. Sometimes a Blacklist such as this, for a game which is MEANT to be a AVN, key part being A, bodes poorly for the likelihood of decent (or perhaps in this case, indecent lol) adult content. It winds up being very short, vary rare, very limited, and very vanilla.... but this Blacklist only listed very extreme things (save the incest thing, which is weird, but not as extreme as the rest)..... so with that in mind, and knowing that other more kinky things likely WILL be in the game... my faith is restored ;) :P
Yeah, I dont like too vanilla stuffs too.
Honestly I think I'm okay with everything here, I mean I agree with your blacklist, I don't hate everything on the same level but also don't care fo it.
I only know two or three here put in a fantasy settig, that worked because of good writing.
Anyway, I'm combing trough my PC removing what takes long to update to make a bit room on the PC.
I liked this however, how close are we to a new update? Somehow I just see an update promt, let's see....oh just chinese
The update is almost complete. I will do beta testing next week and publish the release dates. I usually share updates on Discord or Patreon.
Thank you, I'm not used to Discord yet and hear a lot of weird security things,,,.,uh you might know what I mean.
Patreon I simply don't like no stong reason, not that I could pay for any of these currently anyway in germany.
Thank you, my weird brother did a thing and the game I planned on buying takes another week so I kinda look for something good in between.
That's probably the shortest, most basic and reasonable blacklist I've seen in a while. Anyone worried about this being too vanilla must be unaware of the many possibilities that lie between vanilla and the items on this list.
As an aside, the list seems agnostic to the existence of many other fetishes that are even worse. Maybe it's a good thing you didn't know or think of those. Not going to go into detail, but there's some sick stuff on the internet that you absolutely don't want to stumble onto, ever.
Finally something new thats not written by a pervert lol
Within the world AVN's, that can seen as flaw, not a feature :P :P :P
Don't like it when porn games are too pervy?
A decent story with sex on the side can be done well. Games like Summer gone, Move the Chains etc.. Not trash like Summer with Mia.
我真的喜歡這款遊戲，男主和女角色都很好看
很期待第一章之後的劇情
不過我第一次使用itch.io，所以想請教一下我該怎麼購買/獲得遊戲的完整版 ?
我目前是以章节形式发布游戏的，所以现在还没有完整版。
每当我完成一章，就会在这里上传，你可以免费游玩。
或者，你也可以通过 Patreon支持我，以获得抢先体验的机
Praying for more updates soon!! Love this game! 😁
期待更新Expect updates
best game
Really good start!!! I love all the characters, definitely I'll be waiting for more
“Nobody ever gonna Like your Game” they said. But none of them knew how wrong and still were fully right with that. Thee is nothing to complain. Humor, style, renders, girls. And don’t worry about those peasants below. Complaining about “lesbians” but would you have implemented 2 giga Chads for some fresh air, they would like it much more less. Secretly they goon to all those girls anyway. ^^
Can’t wait for the next update! Highly enjoyable
Hype for this game
A good start, will be watching. Visually, it is stunning, beautiful, and I am not worried about the passe Supernatural storyline... I am a man of culture who plays AVNs for the A part above all else.... it can be a manic, bipolar, cliche MESS of a storyline, as long as the Adult scenes are long, interactive, blocked, paced, and shot right, with high quality graphics.
We definitely have the latter here... now I am just crossing my fingers we get Adult scenes which honor the promise of the aesthetic, and the quality graphics.
great first ep 1 and a great start and story telling
WHY IS EVERYONE USING ALL CAPS TO LEAVE A COMMENT? EITHER READ THE AVN, ENJOY IT, OR DON'T.
yeah, probably because of the font all text looks lıke allcaps.
很棒的游戏，男主角很帅，女主角们非常漂亮。作者渲染的技术也非常不错👍
确实挺不错的
Jesus christ I get this is a porn game, but the amount of incels who threaten to not play the game or give money when they havent even done so anyway is just fucking stupid. not every LI is a straight woman craving only the MC's dick for all her life.
author should not change the vision he has of all the characters just for the sake of a few incels who demand the game be to their standrd or else they will withdraw their meager 5$, acting like that is enough to change the course of the game for their enjoyment.
Hi dev, I'm sorry some people are giving you a hard over such a dumb topic.
i hope you don't bend the knee and keep writing your story the way you want it to be.
Keep up the good work! Lots of love <3!!
Why do i have to bump into lesbians in nearly every one of these games? You folks making these things afraid of heterosexuals or something?
cause lesbians are hot and a majority of games are straight
Okay, let me clarify this. Harper is not a lesbian, she is bisexual, but yes, not everyone has to be straight
mb havent played the game and just responded to the comment because it came off as whiny to me will be more specific in the future
Yeah lesbians are definitely hot if you're still either a teen or a virgin, if you're a grown up and still find lesbians hot you clearly need a bit more excitement in your life.
shits someone elses life, if you find lesbians hot you lowk a creep. they dont want you gang, leave them alone. there sexuality aint meant to be your kink ong.
Wrong. Vast majority of the AVN's slap in the "obligatory" lesbian or bisexual and it's old and used up. Also "lesbians" are hot is subjective. I don't find them hot and I'm not the only person who feels like that. There's a reason they segment this stuff out on porn sites. Some people are into them, some are not. Maybe AVN creators could learn a lesson from how this is segregated elsewhere.
what a incel like thought lmao dude is afraid hot women gonna take his women lmao
Slap whatever name you want on people who disagree with you, doesn't matter. developers want to make money and here I am telling them how to earn money from me. if they want to pay attention, great. if they don't, fine, my money goes elsewhere.
No one cares about your money kid. So bye! game doesn't have to cater to you likes or everyone elses. If you know so much then make your own damm game. If not stfu and just leave.
imagine GETTING THIS TRIGGERED BY SOMEONE ELSES OPINION, DON'T WORRY DUDE WHEN YOU GET OLDER A GRANNY MIGHT FEEL SORRY FOR YOU SO YOU CAN FINALLY GET YOUR DICK WET, UNTIL THEN STICK WITH YOUR LESBIAN PORN LIKE A LOSER.
found the other incel kid, and for the record, I have a woman, something you will never have, and guess what, she loves women too, so I get to enjoy more women than your pathetic cuck life will ever have. Imagine being afraid of lesbian porn, lmao, what an incel.
Imagine being this triggered by an adult game's content.
almost/Jim if all you’re into are cocks then there are definitely better AVN’s for you out there.
Then go away and find a game that suits you. You're one person. Stop acting like you speak for the universe and have some magic key for success 🤡
i mean aren't like 95% of characters in this game hetero? plus what's wrong with pretty gals kissing? It's like the chocolate theory
not saying this game. some game developer need an excuse for mc to have more ladies. then we see"lesbian","sisters","random bs"
Have Chinese?
I'll add the CHINESE translation OF ANDROID AND WINDOWS-LINUX tomorrow.
That's great
The male protagonist is so handsome, just like me. I hope this game gets better and better, and I will keep playing it.
Good luck
Here's my suggestion: You can add some sound effects to the animation. Add a function to turn off the subtitles, I need to take a screenshot.
You can press H to hide subtitles
谢谢
thanks
I like the protagonist, but please don’t turn him into an inexperienced, weak crybaby who everyone has to save just because the plot dictates it.